Monday, April 20, 2020
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Hi Charli, what a great poem about a Unicorn. I love the words you have used to describe her. Do you think next time you could try adding a picture with your writing? You could try to draw something and take a photo or look for one online. Great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Charli, what a cool poem. Your unicorn sounds so nice and soft. You have painted a picture in my mind of a lovely unicorn. Were you describing a toy that you have or a made up unicorn?
ReplyDeleteI like your description of your unicorn. You have used some great metaphors - "She is a hot summer day". I wonder if you need to use the word fluffy twice? How else does she feel?
ReplyDeletehi charlie unicorns are my favorit animals because they have rainbow mains and they have magical horns and I like your writing about unicorns.
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